A Frighten Experience - Draft two

One night, there was something made me scared, while I was heading home. It was a rainy day, but it just drizzly. All of a sudden, I found that there seemed to be someone walked behind me. Due to my fright, I dare not turn my head to see whoever followed me. Thus, I walked as fast as possible to distance from the person. Actually, the way to my home was not far away; however, I felt that was in a long distance at that moment. Feeling anxious, I heard his or her footsteps close to me. I almost scream for help. All at once, he patted me on the shoulder. Being shocked, I heard the stranger call me. Consequently, it’s he that I found is my father. What a marvelous condition.

A Frighten Experience - Draft one

One night, there was something made me scared, while I was heading home. It was a rainy day, but it just drizzly. All of a sudden, I found that there seemed to be someone walked behind me. Due to my fright, I dare not turn my head to see whoever followed me. Thu, I walked as fast as possible to distance from the person. Actually, the way to my home was not far away; however, I felt that was in a long distance at that moment. Feeling anxious, I heard his or her footsteps close to me. I almost scream for help. All at once, he patted me on the shoulder. Being shocked, I heard the stranger call me. Consequently, I found that “he” is my father.

A Dream I Had - Draft two

Many people had some experience of dreaming. One night, I had a dream which was not only queer but also mysterious. In the beginning of the dream, I found that I was in a thick forest. Animals were around a tree which was huge and aged. They seemed to have a ceremony to honor the tree. Owning to my curiosity, I walked forward to join them. Nevertheless, something strange happened. Although I walked a long distance already, they still in a faraway place. As soon as feeling anxious, I fell down a dark and large cave. I yelled out for help, but nobody answered me. All of a sudden, I woke up. I thought that maybe I put too much pressure on me so that I had such an unusual dream.

A Dream I Had

Many people have some experience of having dreams. One night, I had a dream which was not only queer but also mysterious. In the beginning of the dream, I found that I was in a thick forest. Animals were around a tree which was huge and aged. They seemed to have a ceremony to honor the tree. Owning to my curiosity, I walked forward to join them. Nevertheless, something strange happened. I couldn’t touch them, and as soon as I felt anxious, I fell down a dark hole. I yelled out for help, but nobody answered me. All of a sudden, I woke up. I thought that maybe I put too much pressure on me so that I had such an unusual dream.

Making decision - Draft two

Growing up means I should make my own decisions. Gradually, I'm supposed to decide some questions by myself instead of relying on my parents. I should not only be an independent person but also have the responsibility. It means that I'm old enough to afford the results. However, making decisions may not be harmful. I can buy what I want without asking my parents. Therefore, I have to learn how to make a benefit decision for myself; after all I'm a little girl no longer.

To make the hardest decision is annoying me for a period of time. It’s a difficult problem for me to pick my future. That is choosing the department of the university. Should I continue to select to language? And if I want to change my mind, which department is benefit for me? Those questions quiet confuse me. Though I cannot make a choice directly, I should be able to study harder and harder to enter a nice University. I hope that I may do my best to achieve my goal.

Making decision - Draft one

Growing up means I should make my own decisions. Gradually, I'm supposed to decide some questions by myself instead of relying on my parents. I should not only be an independent person but also have the responsibility. It means that I'm old enough to afford the results. However, making decisions may not be harmful. I can buy everything I want without asking my parents. Therefore, I have to learn how to make a benefit decision for myself; After all I'm a little girl no longer.

The hardest decision is annoying me for a period of time. It’s a difficult problem for me to decide my future. That is choosing the department of the university. Should I continue to choose language? And if I want to change my mind, which department is benefit for me? Those questions quiet confuse me. Though I cannot make a choice directly, I can study harder and harder to enter a nice University. I hope that I can do my best to achieve my goal.

Computer - Draft two

The computer is the most influential invention of the twentieth century. It has been widely used in the current society. It also has replaced the aged, heavy, and unhelpful machines. For example, computers can be used to predict the weather condition instead of using a thermometer screen. Besides, people use electric pot to make the rice than use stove. Workers can deal their daily job with computers at home instead of in the company. Students can play games or listen to music to release their pressures. Everyone can gain the knowledge and information from the Internet immediately as well.

Personally, I have a liking for computers. First of all, it’s convenient that I spend less time to reach for information. It helps me to obtain the data quickly. Next, listening to music, reading the jokes from the e-mail, and communicating with friends are my entertainments in my leisure time. At last, we can get hot news in no time not only from TV but also from the Internet.

Autobiography - 1 Draft three

My name is Jing-Ping Huang. I was born in Tainan city in spring of 1990. I am now studying in National Tainan Commercial Vocational Senior High School. I have six members in my family. My father is a solemn man and also the leader in my family, but sometimes he is humorous. My mother is a housewife, and she is always gentle. Each time I make mistakes, they give advice to me right away instead of scolding me. I have two sisters and one brother. At times, they are good examples to me. I firmly believe that I am very lucky to be brought up in such a harmless and healthy environment, and this makes me lead an optimistic life.

I like singing so that I take part in the choir. I’m joyous that we will have a performance in graduation ceremony this year. I like sports as well, such as badminton and volleyball. On account of the volleyball competition, I have learned how to play it well since I was a first grader. And, I’m joyful that our class won the first prize in the volleyball competition. In addition, I have learned painting since my elementary school days, so I love drawing very much. And, I wish that I could become a designer.

Computer - draft one

The computer is the most influential invention of the twentieth century. It has been widely used in the nowadays society. It also has replaced the aged, heavy, and unhelpful machines. For example, computers can be used to predict the weather condition instead use a thermometer screen. And, people use electric pot to make the rice than use stove. Workers can deal their daily job with computers at home instead of in the company. Students can play games or listen to music to release their pressures. Everyone can gain the knowledge and information from the Internet immediately as well.

Personally, I have a liking for computers. First of all, it’s convenient that spend less time to reach for information. It helps me obtain the data quickly. Next, listening to music, reading the jokes from the e-mail, and communicating with friends are my entertainments in my leisure time. At last, we can get hot news in no time not only from TV but also from the Internet.

Autobiography -2 Draft two

I ever took part in the Homepage Design of Refusing Drugs Contest held nationally in my junior high school days, and our group got the second place. Due to the contest, I got the knowledge of drugs. Soon after the Joint Entrance Examination for Senior High Schools, I chose the Department of Applied Foreign Language, and I attended the dancing club. Thanks to the performance of dancing held by our club on Dragon Boat Festival last year, I got a good opportunity to premiere in front of the public. In order to present this showing, we spent a large amount of time practicing. Though I did not dance well, I got plenty of experiences from it. At least, I have bolder than before when I stand on the stage. Now, as soon as listening to the music, I will dance with music unconsciously, and I have made progress today.

Last mouth we had the chance to visit National Kaohsiung First University of Science and Technology. I think that I care for the environment of studying. Therefore, I have made up my mind to study harder and harder. I will also do my best to improve my language skill, in order to pass the Joint Entrance Examination to colleges, and get into there.

Autobiography-2 Draft one

I ever took part in Homepage Design of refuse the drugs contest held by national in junior high, and our group got the second place. Due to the contest, I got the knowledge of drugs. Then after the Joint Entrance Examination for Senior High Schools, choosing the Department of Applied Foreign Language, and I attend the dancing club. Thanks to the performance of dancing was held by our club on Dragon Boat Festival last year. In order to the performance, we spent a large amount of time practicing. Though I did not well, I got plenty of experiences from that.

Last mouth we had the chance to visit National Kaohsiung First University of Science and Technology. I think that I care for the environment of studying. Therefore, I have made up my mind to study harder and harder. I will also do my best to improve my language skill, in order to pass the Joint Entrance Examination to colleges, and get into there.

Autobiography-1 - Draft two

My name is Jing-Ping Huang. I was born in Tainan city in spring of 1990. I am studying in National Tainan Commercial Vocational Senior High School. I have six members in my family. My father is a solemn man and also become the leader in my family, but sometimes he is humorous. My mother is a house wife, she is always gentle. Each time I do something wrong, they give advice to me right away. I have two sisters, the one is elder, another is younger, and a younger brother. At times they are good examples to me. I think that I am very lucky to be brought up in even a harmless and healthy environment. The influence made me an optimistic life.

Due to I learn painting from elementary school so that I love drawing. In my free time, I will draw some pictures. I like some sports such as badminton and volleyball. Actually I don’t like volleyball at first, until I entrance senior high school. On account of the volleyball competition, I have to learn how to play it. Finally, I love volleyball very much, though I am not good at it.

Autobiography-1 - Draft one

My name is Jing-Ping Huang. I was born in Tainan city in spring of 1990. I am studying in National Tainan Commercial Vocational Senior High School. I have six members in my family. My father is a solemn man and also become the leader in my family, but sometimes he is humorous. My mother is a house wife, she is always gentle. Each time I do something wrong, they give advice to me right away. I have two sisters, the one is elder, another is younger, and a younger brother. Sometimes they are a good example to me. I think that I am very lucky to be brought up in even a harmless and healthy environment. The influence made me an optimistic life.

Due to I learn drawing from elementary school so that I love drawing. In my free time, I will draw some pictures. I like exercise such as badminton and volleyball. Actually I don’t like volleyball at first, until I entrance senior high. On account of the volleyball competition, I have to learn how to play it. Finally, I love volleyball very much, though I am not good at it.

Translation - Draft two

Choosing the TV programs carefully is important. Though TV is an essential channel to provide information and entertainment, it may have some disadvantages. Some programs which are full of violence and lusts have negative effects to the teenagers. Spent too much time in watching TV would also hurt the eyesight. Therefore, we should choose the TV programs which benefit to our bodies and minds. The most important thing is not to be a couch potato.


Computers play an important role in our everyday life. It can help students to hand in the homework quickly, and also help people to send the information in time. As long as you turn on the computer, you will fall in love with it. However, being sure to remind yourself, do not sit in front of the computer too long. Most of parents dislike their children too depending on computers. Especially discussion of bulletin board is wasting time.

Translation - Draft one

TV Program Choosing the TV programs carefully is important. Though TV is an essential channel to provide information and entertainment, it may have some disadvantage. Some programs which full of violence and lust are harm to the teenagers. Spent too much time watching TV would also hurt the eyesight. Therefore, we should choose the TV programs which benefit to our bodies and hearts. The most important thing is not to be a couch potato.

Computer Computers play an important role in our everyday life. It can help students to hand in the homework quickly, also help people to send the information in time. As long as you turn on the computer, you will fall in love with it. However, being sure to remind yourself, do not sit in front of the computer too long. Most of parents don’t like their children depending on computers. Especially discussion of bulletin board is wasting time.

A Nice Father - Draft two

Tom is an active student. He often gets good grades except for Math. One day, he got poor grades in Math again. That night, Tom took the report card to his father. The man who looks rigid is Tom’s father. Tom was very nervous and afraid that he would get some punishments. On the contrary, the father just said that it was OK; he never chided him for the grades. He just wants Tom to be happy and health. Have a good attitude is the most important thing in his whole life.

A Nice Father - Draft one

Tom is an active student. He often gets good grades except Math. One day, he got poor grades in Math again. That night, Tom took the report card to his father. The man who looks rigid is Tom’s father. Tom was very nervous and afraid that he would get some punishments. On the contrary, the father just said that it was OK; he never chided him for the grade. He just wants Tom happy and health.

Tips for Staying Healthy - Draft two

Health is the most precious thing we have in our lives. Now, I have three opinions for you. First of all, you need a regular sleep, go to bed and get up early. The next day, you will get more energy to work. In addition, doing some exercise is also an important thing. You do not need heavy exercise. On the contrary, you can try some light exercise, such as walking and jogging. According to the news, laughing at least 30 minutes a day, the body will also be better. Keep smiling and bring the good mood to everyone. Try these tips; you’ll get good health.

2007/02/12

Today, we some friends went to Penny’s grandfather’s home to barbecue. The place was different from my thought. Behind the house, there is a stream which the water is cool and clear. All of us took off our shoes and socks to play the water. We had a good time in Penny’s grandpa’s home. In the end, we said something about today or our future. Wow! It’s was so moving. Though there is a country, the air is fresh. In addition, Penny’s families are friendly and kindly. We deeply appreciated them.

A journey

During the Chinese New Year、my family and my father’s friends went to a travel. We played 3 days in 南橫 and Taitung. We went to lots of places、such as 天池中之關,栗松Hot Spring,龍山Suspension Bridge,脫線雞場,Forest Park、and so on. The night in 天池 was very beautiful. The sky was full of stars; I thought that was the most beautiful view I’ve ever seen. The most unforgettable is the 栗松Hot Spring、the road to went there was difficult to walk. Everyone needed to put on the gloves and scrambled over the rocks. That was very dangerous. I thought that I got a memorable journey and a special experience. 2007/02/18~20

Tips for Staying Healthy - Draft one

Health is the most precious thing we have in our lives. Now、I have three opinions for you. First of all、you need a regular sleep、go to bed and get up early. The next day、you will get more energy to work. In addition、do some exercise is also an important thing. You do not need heavy exercise、such as walking and jogging are OK. According to the news、laughing at least 30 minutes a day the body also will be better. Keep smile and bring the good mood to everyone. Try these tips、you’ll in good health.

Learning English - Draft two

English is an international language in this modern world. And there are some examples to learn English. First, listen to some English songs, and sing along with it. Its can help us to improve our listening. Second, read the compositions such as from the English newspapers and novels. The last one is the most important one; don’t be afraid to speak English, and try to talk to foreigners, your English teachers, or your classmates. There are many different ways to learn English, and you can choose the way you like to learn, then you can learn English well.

Learning English - Draft one

English is an international language in this modern world. And there are some examples to learn English. First, listen to some English songs, and sing along with it. Its can help us to improve our listening. Second, read the compositions such as from the English newspapers and novels. The last one is the most important one; don’t be afraid to speak English, and try to talk to foreigners, your English teachers, or your classmates. There are many different ways to learn English, and you can choose the way you like to learn, then you can learn English well.

My Bedroom -- Draft two

My bedroom is a rectangle. As you enter the room, you will see a large window on the back wall at first. There is a beautiful view outside. My bed is on the left corner, next to the window. And my big closet is directly in front of the bed, on the left of the door. My desk is on the right of window, and chair is in front of the desk. My bookcase is on the wall to the right corner. Also, there is a big mirror next to the bookcase on the wall. In addition, there is a large and cute rug on the floor. The light is yellow, so I think that my bedroom is the warmest room, though it’s not the largest.

My Bedroom - Draft one

My bedroom is a rectangle. When you enter in the door, you will see a large window on the back wall at first. It has a beautiful view outside. My bed is on the left corner, next to the window. And my big closet is directly in front of the bed, on the left of the door. My desk is on the right of window, and chair is in front of the desk. My bookcase is on the wall to the right corner. Also, there is a big mirror next to the bookcase, on the wall. In addition, there is a large and cute rug on the floor. The light is yellow, so I think that my bedroom is the warmest room, though it’s not the largest.

An Embarrassing Experience - Draft two

There were many embarrassing experiences which happened on me.And the most embarrassing situation let me lose my face. That day, I wanted to go to Taipei with my cousin. Before I took the train, I felt very nervous, because it was the first time for me to take a train.Then I went to the toilet to calm my feeling down, and I found the door couldn’t be locked. I didn’t think that was a problem at that time.Then, a person opened my door. I shocked, and closed the door quickly. Suddenly, I felt very shy and wanted to run away from the place. I will be very careful whenever I go to the rest room.

An Embarrassing Experience - Draft one

There were many embarrassing experiences which happened on me.And the most embarrassing situation let me lose my face.That day, I wanted to go to Taipei with my cousin.Before I took the train, I felt very nervous, because it was the first time for me to take a train.Then I went to the toilet to calm my feeling down.And, I found the door couldn’t be lock.I didn’t think that was a problem at that time.Then, a person opened my door.I shocked, and closed the door quickly.Suddenly, I felt very shy and wanted to run away from the place.Since then I have been very careful when I go to the rest room.