A Frighten Experience - Draft two

One night, there was something made me scared, while I was heading home. It was a rainy day, but it just drizzly. All of a sudden, I found that there seemed to be someone walked behind me. Due to my fright, I dare not turn my head to see whoever followed me. Thus, I walked as fast as possible to distance from the person. Actually, the way to my home was not far away; however, I felt that was in a long distance at that moment. Feeling anxious, I heard his or her footsteps close to me. I almost scream for help. All at once, he patted me on the shoulder. Being shocked, I heard the stranger call me. Consequently, it’s he that I found is my father. What a marvelous condition.

A Frighten Experience - Draft one

One night, there was something made me scared, while I was heading home. It was a rainy day, but it just drizzly. All of a sudden, I found that there seemed to be someone walked behind me. Due to my fright, I dare not turn my head to see whoever followed me. Thu, I walked as fast as possible to distance from the person. Actually, the way to my home was not far away; however, I felt that was in a long distance at that moment. Feeling anxious, I heard his or her footsteps close to me. I almost scream for help. All at once, he patted me on the shoulder. Being shocked, I heard the stranger call me. Consequently, I found that “he” is my father.