The computer is the most influential invention of the twentieth century. It has been widely used in the nowadays society. It also has replaced the aged, heavy, and unhelpful machines. For example, computers can be used to predict the weather condition instead use a thermometer screen. And, people use electric pot to make the rice than use stove. Workers can deal their daily job with computers at home instead of in the company. Students can play games or listen to music to release their pressures. Everyone can gain the knowledge and information from the Internet immediately as well.
Personally, I have a liking for computers. First of all, it’s convenient that spend less time to reach for information. It helps me obtain the data quickly. Next, listening to music, reading the jokes from the e-mail, and communicating with friends are my entertainments in my leisure time. At last, we can get hot news in no time not only from TV but also from the Internet.
Thursday, May 24, 2007
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還不錯喔~~
and, people use..
→and people use...
大致上我覺得ok,
For example, computers can be used to predict the weather condition 〝instead〞use a thermometer screen.
→instead of using
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Personally, I have a liking for computers. First of all, it’s convenient 〝that spend〞less time to reach for information.
that we spent 不然主詞會變computer
And, people ...
→用Besides, 也不錯_
寫的很好欸_:]
我看完了~ 不錯不錯~~
in the nowadays society.
nowadays是副詞
要用current
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