Sunday, January 07, 2007
My Bedroom - Draft one
My bedroom is a rectangle. When you enter in the door, you will see a large window on the back wall at first. It has a beautiful view outside. My bed is on the left corner, next to the window. And my big closet is directly in front of the bed, on the left of the door. My desk is on the right of window, and chair is in front of the desk. My bookcase is on the wall to the right corner. Also, there is a big mirror next to the bookcase, on the wall. In addition, there is a large and cute rug on the floor. The light is yellow, so I think that my bedroom is the warmest room, though it’s not the largest.
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enter in the door我覺得怪怪的,或許用enter through the door 比較好
"It has a beautiful view outside"
用法不太對,用there is...會比較好
When you enter in the door
可以改寫成When you enter the room
我是瀞婷"
When you enter in the door,→When entering in the door。
there is a big mirror next to the bookcase, on the wall. →不需要『,』直接on the wall.
though it’s not the largest→room.Unfortunately it’s not the largest
其他都不錯~
When you enter in the door
→As you enter the room
When you enter the door→When you entering the door.
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