Translation - Draft two

Choosing the TV programs carefully is important. Though TV is an essential channel to provide information and entertainment, it may have some disadvantages. Some programs which are full of violence and lusts have negative effects to the teenagers. Spent too much time in watching TV would also hurt the eyesight. Therefore, we should choose the TV programs which benefit to our bodies and minds. The most important thing is not to be a couch potato.


Computers play an important role in our everyday life. It can help students to hand in the homework quickly, and also help people to send the information in time. As long as you turn on the computer, you will fall in love with it. However, being sure to remind yourself, do not sit in front of the computer too long. Most of parents dislike their children too depending on computers. Especially discussion of bulletin board is wasting time.

Translation - Draft one

TV Program Choosing the TV programs carefully is important. Though TV is an essential channel to provide information and entertainment, it may have some disadvantage. Some programs which full of violence and lust are harm to the teenagers. Spent too much time watching TV would also hurt the eyesight. Therefore, we should choose the TV programs which benefit to our bodies and hearts. The most important thing is not to be a couch potato.

Computer Computers play an important role in our everyday life. It can help students to hand in the homework quickly, also help people to send the information in time. As long as you turn on the computer, you will fall in love with it. However, being sure to remind yourself, do not sit in front of the computer too long. Most of parents don’t like their children depending on computers. Especially discussion of bulletin board is wasting time.

A Nice Father - Draft two

Tom is an active student. He often gets good grades except for Math. One day, he got poor grades in Math again. That night, Tom took the report card to his father. The man who looks rigid is Tom’s father. Tom was very nervous and afraid that he would get some punishments. On the contrary, the father just said that it was OK; he never chided him for the grades. He just wants Tom to be happy and health. Have a good attitude is the most important thing in his whole life.

A Nice Father - Draft one

Tom is an active student. He often gets good grades except Math. One day, he got poor grades in Math again. That night, Tom took the report card to his father. The man who looks rigid is Tom’s father. Tom was very nervous and afraid that he would get some punishments. On the contrary, the father just said that it was OK; he never chided him for the grade. He just wants Tom happy and health.

Tips for Staying Healthy - Draft two

Health is the most precious thing we have in our lives. Now, I have three opinions for you. First of all, you need a regular sleep, go to bed and get up early. The next day, you will get more energy to work. In addition, doing some exercise is also an important thing. You do not need heavy exercise. On the contrary, you can try some light exercise, such as walking and jogging. According to the news, laughing at least 30 minutes a day, the body will also be better. Keep smiling and bring the good mood to everyone. Try these tips; you’ll get good health.