I ever took part in Homepage Design of refuse the drugs contest held by national in junior high, and our group got the second place. Due to the contest, I got the knowledge of drugs. Then after the Joint Entrance Examination for Senior High Schools, choosing the Department of Applied Foreign Language, and I attend the dancing club. Thanks to the performance of dancing was held by our club on Dragon Boat Festival last year. In order to the performance, we spent a large amount of time practicing. Though I did not well, I got plenty of experiences from that.
Last mouth we had the chance to visit National Kaohsiung First University of Science and Technology. I think that I care for the environment of studying. Therefore, I have made up my mind to study harder and harder. I will also do my best to improve my language skill, in order to pass the Joint Entrance Examination to colleges, and get into there.
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I attend the dancing club→attended
I will also do my best to improve my language skill, in order to pass...中間應該沒有逗點吧?!(不太確定)
其他很ok喲~
...choosing the Department of Applied Foreign Language, and I attend the dancing club.
→整句好像沒有主詞呢,,
改I chose...,and attended...
寫的不錯噢:]
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