Sunday, February 25, 2007
2007/02/12
Today, we some friends went to Penny’s grandfather’s home to barbecue. The place was different from my thought. Behind the house, there is a stream which the water is cool and clear. All of us took off our shoes and socks to play the water. We had a good time in Penny’s grandpa’s home. In the end, we said something about today or our future. Wow! It’s was so moving. Though there is a country, the air is fresh. In addition, Penny’s families are friendly and kindly. We deeply appreciated them.
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we said something about today or our future.→ said改成told 還有談論
today 和future 用and
It’s was so moving.→有2個動詞
Penny’s families→family好像不用複數
寫的很好呦!
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